You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter Ask about the school Say what kind of accommodation you want Mention any special request you have (for example diet).

Dear Dora! I hope my letter will find you in good health. The reason why I writing is to thank you for the help to my family members,

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I was on a trip to Turkey. I am extremely pleased with your kindness. I and my parents will never forget your help. Every day, Mom and Dad are at work and at home I have a little Baby sister. You Always take care of him,I am away! I am glad to be with you🤗 I appreciate your

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taking the time to help my family members. Even helping with household chores you will bring

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some kind of gift🎁as a thank you and choose it yourself. Thanks to you, my trip here went well and I have finished my studies perfectly.

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, I invite you to the restaurant, after returning from the trip. We will all be pleased if you can come again! ❤️🥰🤗 Love Laili! 🤍🍃

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task achievement

Ensure the content of the letter directly addresses all the prompt requirements: asking about the English course at the school, types of accommodation desired, and any special requests.

coherence and cohesion

Use a clear and appropriate structure for the letter, organizing information into separate paragraphs that each focus on a single aspect of the query, thus making your letter more cohesive and easier to follow.

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Adopt a formal tone throughout the letter when approaching an educational institution for information, as casual or overly friendly language may not be appropriate.

coherence and cohesion

Begin with a formal salutation and close the letter with an appropriate sign-off when writing to an institution.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

156 words

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overseas education
language proficiency
homestay accommodation
housing options
dietary requirements
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course modules
language courses
school facilities
course duration
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