You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter Ask about the school Say what kind of accommodation you want Mention any special request you have (for example diet).
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you in order to inquire about your
school
in London. I have heard that your school
is really famous for its teaching system and strict discipline. That is
why I am interested in studying at your school
.
My first request is that I would like you to give more information about the school
facilities, courses and the process of lessons. Moreover
, I would like to know about the library of your school
.
In addition
to this
, it would be better if I could stay in the school
dormitory because I would have an opportunity to communicate with native speakers and my group mates.
By the way, I need to say that as I am a Muslim, I would be grateful if you could provide me with meals regarding my religion and a spare room to pray.
It would be of great help if you could fax me the details of the above-mentioned enquiries.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Komil TursunovSubmitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on
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coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear paragraph division for different requests or topics to enhance readability and structure.
task achievement
Ensure you address all parts of the task sufficiently; some areas could be more fully developed with additional details or examples.
grammar
Consider using a wider range of sentence structures to demonstrate grammatical range and control.
lexical resource
Use a variety of vocabulary suited to the context, including more precise terms related to accommodations and special requests.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.