The pie charts show how many teenagers preferred reading, watching TV or using the internet in 3 different countries during leisure time in 2013.

The pie charts show how many teenagers preferred reading, watching TV or using the internet in 3 different countries during leisure time in 2013.
The pie chart reveals information about the number of youths between ages 13 and 19 and which were the preferred activities
such
as reading a book, watching TV or exploring the internet in their spare time for three specific countries in 2013.
Overall
, it can be seen that
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the most popular leisure hour activity was watching TV in
Australia
and the US in 2013,
while
in the
UK
teenagers generally preferred reading when they were free.
According to
the pie charts, the proportion of teenagers who spend their free time watching TV in
Australia
and the US was the same, each at 45% of the total in 2013,
whereas
the relevant figure in the
UK
was significantly lower, a fifth of the whole. When it comes to reading, the share of teenagers who were interested in
this
type of activity in
Australia
was precisely two times higher than that in the US, at 30% of the juveniles,
while
in the
UK
half of the responders devoted their free moment to reading.
Finally
, using the Internet was represented by 40% of young people in the US in 2013, which made it a leader among the above-mentioned three countries.
In addition
, the corresponding figures for the
UK
and
Australia
were at 30% and at 25% respectively.
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