Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some say that
people
should work
in the country
where they studied and trained, while
others believe that individuals are free to choose where they want to go. This
essay will argue that although
countries
do
a Verb problem
make
lot
of effort to train these people
, they have the right to choose where they want to work
because they have their own dreams.
On the one hand, some professions such
as doctors, scientists and engineers need many years to finish the
Change the word
their
career
. Fix the agreement mistake
careers
Then
, governments spend a lot
of money and time to train and prepare them, so in
the Correct word choice
that in
future
they can succeed and help to improve the Add a comma
future,
country
. If they decide to work
in other countries
, then
the nation where they have take
classes will not gain anything. Replace the word
taken
For example
, many Chinese scientists went to the United States to study
their career
, but after graduating they went back to China, and almost no one knows where they have studied. Fix the agreement mistake
careers
However
, in my opinion, people
pay for university, so countries
have gain
enough funds from the students.
Wrong verb form
gained
On the other hand
, some people
have wasted a lot
of money to travel to other countries
to study
. This
is because of
the reputation of the place or the Change preposition
apply
country
from where they come from, do
not offer classes related to the Correct subject-verb agreement
does
career
. So the only option they have,
is to Remove the comma
apply
study
in other nations and then
go back to their country
, in this
way, education in their country
can improve. For instance
, some developing and no developed
Verb problem
underdeveloped
countries
do not have engineering careers because are very difficult areas that they have not learnt yet, so people
only can travel to other nations to study
the career
. I believe that allowing people
to work
where they want will improve education of
all Change preposition
in
countries
.
In conclusion, although
countries
spend a lot
of time teaching and training people
, they have the right to follow their dreams or get back to their countries
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task response
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Your opinion
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