Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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should

work

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in the

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where they studied and trained,

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others believe that individuals are free to choose where they want to go.

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essay will argue that

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countries

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a

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of effort to train these

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, they have the right to choose where they want to

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because they have their own dreams. On the one hand, some professions

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as doctors, scientists and engineers need many years to finish

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career

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.

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, governments spend a

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of money and time to train and prepare them, so

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the

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they can succeed and help to improve the

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. If they decide to

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in other

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,

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the nation where they have

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classes will not gain anything.

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, many Chinese scientists went to the United States to

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career

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, but after graduating they went back to China, and almost no one knows where they have studied.

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, in my opinion,

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pay for university, so

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have

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enough funds from the students.

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, some

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have wasted a

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of money to travel to other

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to

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is because

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the reputation of the place or the

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from where they come from,

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not offer classes related to the

career

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. So the only option they have

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is to

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in other nations and

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go back to their

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, in

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way, education in their

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can improve.

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, some developing and

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countries

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do not have engineering careers because are very difficult areas that they have not learnt yet, so

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only can travel to other nations to

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the

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. I believe that allowing

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to

work

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where they want will improve education

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all

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. In conclusion,

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countries

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spend a

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of time teaching and training

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, they have the right to follow their dreams or get back to their

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