Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to suggest a name Linking Words
Mr.
Rakesh Prasad, for the recognition and award he deserves for his contribution to Add the comma(s)
, Mr.
help
a rural village in India.
Change the verb form
helping
Mr.
Rakesh Prasad is a reputed and Change the punctuation
Mr
well known
doctor Add a hyphen
well-known
specialized
in treating patients with cardiovascular diseases. Through national Wrong verb form
specialising
media
he came to find out that in a rural village of India people are Add a comma
media,
dieing
of Correct your spelling
dying
heart-attack
and other related cardiovascular diseases Correct your spelling
heart attack
due to
a cloth Linking Words
merchandizing
factory Correct your spelling
merchandising
disposing
its by-products mixed with harmful chemicals in a local river which was causing Add the preposition
disposing of
blockage
in the arteries of locals when they were using Add an article
a blockage
the blockage
this
Linking Words
water
for domestic use Use synonyms
such
as drinking. Locals were using a generic Linking Words
water
purifier which was not enough to remove all the toxic chemicals, Use synonyms
therefore
he decided to take Linking Words
Add an article
the matter
matter
Fix the agreement mistake
matters
in
his own hands and using his personal finances came up with a powerful Change preposition
into
water
purifier which used Use synonyms
cholrinification
and ultra-violet Correct your spelling
cornification
filteration
to make the Correct your spelling
filtration
water
drinkable again and Use synonyms
also
supported local villagers to file a Linking Words
law-suit
against the factory's malpractice.
I suggest that the local government should nominate his name for Correct your spelling
lawsuit
Mother
Teresa Award and the newspaper should print an article on Correct article usage
the Mother
this
person's contribution towards society.
Linking Words
Thankyou
,
Ishpreet SoniCorrect your spelling
Thank you
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Task Achievement
Ensure that the letter fully responds to all parts of the prompt, providing detailed and relevant information about the suggested person and their contributions to the community.
Suitable Writing Tone
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Coherence and Cohesion
Organize ideas more cohesively, using clear paragraph structures to present information in a logical order.
Lexical Resource
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Grammatical Range
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.