Some people say that watching TV programmes and movies related to crime are popular. Why do you think it’s popular and how does it affect society?

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Rakesh Prasad, for the recognition and award he deserves for his contribution to helping a rural village in India. Mr. Rakesh Prasad is a reputed and well-known doctor specialising in treating patients with cardiovascular diseases. Through national media, he came to find out that in a rural village

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, Ishpreet Soni

Submitted by ishpreet2299 on Wed Nov 15 2023

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Intricate plots
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Unexpected twists
Psychological appeal
Curiosity
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Criminal behavior
Relatability
Identification
Pursuit of justice
Moral dilemmas
Human struggle
Educational aspect
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Social commentary
Corruption
Inequality
Effectiveness of the justice system

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Some people say that watching TV programmes and movies related to crime are popular. Why do you think it’s popular and how does it affect society?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that all lawbreakers should be taken into prison. In contrast, others believe there are better alternatives (for example, doing work or learning skills in the community). Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today, people can work and live in anywhere they want, because of the improvement of communication technology and transport. Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.

Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?