The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.

A glance at

two

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the two

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pie graphs provided reveals a sharp

comparision

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comparison

of nutritional consistency between medium baked

potato

and macaroni, measured in

percent

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per cent

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.

Overall

,

cacbonhydrates

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carbohydrates

carbohydrate

has

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have

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the majority

propotion

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proportion

in both mentioned dinners. In terms of medium baked

potato

, no other

propotions

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proportions

promotions

are as high as

cacbonhydrates

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carbohydrates

which accounts for

by

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apply

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35%, closely followed by protein with 25%.

Meanwhile

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glucose and other nutrients both make up the same

propotion

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proportion

with

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at

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15% and the least significant number with 10%

takes

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taken

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up by saturated fat. With regard to macaroni, an overwhelming majority of nutritional consistency is constituted by

cacbonhydrates

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carbohydrates

with approximately

a

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half of the pie chart.

At the end

of the scale,

although

saturated fat makes up the most insignificant part with 21%, it is double compared

that

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to that

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of

medium

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a medium

the medium

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baked

potato

.

Moreover

, there are two nutrients, which

takes

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take

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up 11%, namely protein and glucose. Meanwhile other nutrients accounts for 5% which is one-third that of

potato

.