The pie chart presents a particular number of hours in a British university library for two different student statuses and all students.

The pie chart presents a particular number of hours in a British university library for two different student statuses and all students.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart presents a particular number of hours in a British university library for two different student statuses and all students.
The pie chart presents a particular number of
hours
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in a British university library for two different student statuses and all
students
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.
It is clear that
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postgraduates spent considerably more time in the library than undergraduate
students
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or other
students
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. Now, turning to the details, just over
a
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half of the postgraduate
students
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who spent fifteen
hours
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or more appear to be less balanced compared to undergraduates and all
students
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(9 and 15 per cent, respectively).
Furthermore
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, exactly half of the total
students
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who spent 1-7
hours
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in the library were very close to the postgraduates who spent 15
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per week,
whereas
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the average for undergraduates in
this
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category is a hefty 63 per cent.
On the other hand
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, the entire student body and postgraduates were relatively similar in spending 8-14
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, but there was a tiny potion between 32 and 35 per cent.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "presents" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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