The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in there different countries.
The given line graph illustrates the senior citizen residency in the
countries
USA
, Sweden and Japan
in the period of 1940 to 2040. When looking at the graph can see that, population are increasing throughout the years for all the countries
.
In 1940, USA
had the highest number of elderly people resident in 10% while
Japan
had the lowest at only 5%. Eventhogh Japan
had lowest amount of people it significantly increased in 2020 by 10% and in 2040 it shows the massive hike in the population upto 25% which is higher than other two countries
. The countries
USA
and Sweden showing the propotion nearly similar pecent but when reaching 2040, Swenden expected higher population around 25% which is higher than USA
.
Finally
, the graph indicate that Japan
has improving their healthcare while
USA
and Sweden significanly improving throughout the years.Submitted by n_wara11 on
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