A friend of yours is thinking of going on a campus holiday for the first time this summer. He / She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follow: Dear….,
Lee,
I am writing a letter to guide you for the
summer
vacations
Change the noun form
vacation
trip
.
Despite
, some drawbacks were there during camping on the beach like limited accommodation and it was expensive living in camps. Correct pronoun usage
Despite this
Furthermore
, limited food facility was also
problem
that you cannot eat different cuisine.
When I received your email I was happy to see that you are going on the Add an article
the problem
a problem
summer
holidays. Besides
this
, I felt great that you would camping with your family. I have been to Dubai two times with my family and I feel nostalgic whenever I remember those days. It was fantastic
Add an article
a fantastic
trip
and we had planned for five days and we spent
Verb problem
had
relaxing
time. Correct article usage
a relaxing
Although
, We had many things to do we played volleyball, badminton and thug games. Dubai
Change noun form
Dubai's
ambiance
is perfect for Change the spelling
ambience
summer
Add an article
a summer
trip
and many people come from abroad to enjoy Fix the agreement mistake
trips
in
Change preposition
apply
summer
days. You could enjoy with
these activities and make your time memorable.
Would it be OK Change preposition
apply
that
I Correct word choice
if
had gone
with you on Wrong verb form
went
this
trip
? If it fine
Add a missing verb
is fine
then
I'll make arrangements of booking
Change preposition
to book
ticket
and accommodation for Correct article usage
a ticket
this
trip
.
If you allow to
me Change preposition
apply
so
I can reserve Correct word choice
apply
hotel
near Correct article usage
a hotel
to
the beach so we Change preposition
apply
could
live together.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Warm Wishes,Wrong verb form
can
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task response
Provide a clear response to the task prompt and address all of the required bullet points in the prompt. Also, avoid mixing up personal experiences with the task scenario.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure a proper greeting and closing for the letter. Use appropriate linking words and phrases to help the letter flow more smoothly and cohesively.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use a wider range of lexical resources to express ideas more clearly and precisely.
grammatical range
Improve the accuracy and range of your grammar, including appropriate use of verb tenses, sentence structures, and punctuation.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.