The pie charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organisations in 2008 and 2014.

The pie charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organisations in 2008 and 2014.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of six different
volunteers
by organisations in 2008 and 2014.
Overall
,
while
the fractions of
volunteers
in the environmental, sports, and healthcare sectors increased significantly, the three other sectors (education, art, and other) experienced a slight decrease. Looking into details, the rate of
volunteers
in environmental sectors witnessed a significant increase, rising from just a fifth in 2008 to almost a quarter in 2014.
Similarly
, the figure for sport increased drastically by a ten, from 15% to 25% followed by just 7% of healthcare
volunteers
undergoing a slight rise to approximately a ten in 2014.
In contrast
, the percentage of other sorts of
volunteers
underwent a steady decline, falling from 15% in 2008 to only 9% in 2014.
Likewise
, nearly a quarter of educational
volunteers
plunged to just under a fifth, from 24% to only 17%,
along with
nearly a fifth of art
volunteers
going down by 6%, from 18% in 2008 to about 12% in 2014.
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