The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Average distance in miles travelled per person per year, by mode of travel
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The table figure below illustrates data
of
the usage rate of different Change preposition
on
travel
modes in England which have shown some change based on the travelled distance
on
the span of 1985 to 2000.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, the sum of the travelled distance
in miles
is showing
an upward trend, going from around 4700 Wrong verb form
shows
miles
in year
1985 to just under 6475 Change the article
the year
miles
in year
2000.
Change the article
the year
Although
the overall
total result is going in a positive trend, not all of the travel
modes are growing equally. Firstly
, it is apparent that some travel
methods shown
an increase in the total Add a missing verb
have shown
distance
traveled, with Car
as the Correct article usage
the Car
travel
method which have
the largest surge of a whopping 1600 Change the verb form
has
miles
resulting in a total of 4806 miles
which constitute
more than Correct subject-verb agreement
constitutes
a
half of the total travelled Correct article usage
apply
distance
. Similarly
, several other travel
methods are also
showing quite promising growth with Train
, Long Fix the agreement mistake
Trains
distance
bus
, and other Fix the agreement mistake
buses
travel
methods showing positive trend
in the smaller scale with the sum of Fix the agreement mistake
trends
distance
growth under the 100s with 366 miles
, 124 miles
, and 585 miles
.
On the other hand
, several transportation modes are being used less frequent
in Change the word
frequently
year
2000 compared to Change the article
the year
the
1985. The most diminished transportation mode is the Local bus which almost lost half of the total mileage travelled, going from 429 Change the article
apply
miles
to under the three hundreds
. Showing a similar result Change to singular
hundred
although
less drastic is the Bicycle which shown
a slight decrease of 10 Wrong verb form
showed
miles
, resulting in a mere 41 miles
in year
2000.Change the article
the year
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words travel, distance, miles, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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