The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000.
The line charts give statistical
data
from 1920 until 2000 about the achievement packages delivered using FedEx
and TNT
post services. In addition
, the data
shows information based on the numbers of mail
two biggest companies.
In general, the line chart had fluctuating data
. In contrast
, the majority value of TNT
company
had increased. Besides
that, FedEx
had the highest decreasing number
of delivered mail
.
Regarding increased data
, we can see the highest increased gradient of package mail
delivery of TNT
from 1980 until 1990, where the number
delivered in 1980 the approximately 11000 mail
delivered. Meanwhile, in 1990, The TNT
company
had reach sent mail
to 22000 parcels
. On the other hand
, we can get information TNT
company
had growing services.
In terms of the decreased value of FedEx
, the highest decreased number
of delivered parcels
from 1940 until 1950, where the number
of sent parcels
used FedEx
in 1940 got sent mail
the approximately 24000 package parcels
. Moreover
, in 1950, FedEx
company
failed to protect the consumer. The effect is the rate of delivered parcels
by FedEx
decreases until approximately 14000 mail
sent
.Add a missing verb
is sent
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