Some peoplebelieve that the difference between the lowest paid jobs and the highest paid jobs should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that the salary range of maximumly and minimum paid professions

need

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to be decreased.

Although

I acknowledge that the highest wage difference

is

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negatively

affect

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to

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the fairness of society as a whole, I mostly believe that in the period of contemporary economic relationships, the value of worker should be determined naturally without any intervention. Admittedly, in the modern world where the

payment

of your work is not measured by the amount of time and dedication

has

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been spent, the justice of state institutions will definitely go under suspicion among the citizens. Declining

difference

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differences

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will establish the middle class in which the people have had more or less

the

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equal

accessability

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access

to

the

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financial ,

social

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and social

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resources and opportunities in comparison with others.

For example

, in northern

west

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Western

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countries like Norway and Finland by the virtue of

socialist

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approach, residents of those feeling ensured that their contribution to the country has been valued and returned

back

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in the form of money.

On the other hand

, as the recent monetary public policy thesis state

that

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each human-related

activities

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activity

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have to reach

equilibrium

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an equilibrium

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point in which the

demand

and supply of one service should be equal.

Therefore

, if the

demand

side is over on the side of one job,

consequently

the

payment

will be fairly high,

instead

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if the

demand

is weak or alternatively, there is a surplus of supply

so

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payment

will not be accepted by the majority of workers.

For instance

,

extremely

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high

demand

of

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for

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popular video streamers makes them lucrative despite

of

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not having

appropriate

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contribution to the social development of

country

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the country

a country

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,

on the other hand

, firefighters who

are rescuing

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their lives for ordinary citizens

paid

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are paid

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less than average which is a standard norm for the market economy, but dangerous for fairness of society. In conclusion, the idea of

reduction

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reducing

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payment

difference

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differences

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is quite reasonable from the justice side of view,

however

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modern public policy perspective is dictating the advocating the disparity of salaries between high and

low paid

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low-paid

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workers.