The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart illustrates the process of utilizing uranium
while
producing nuclear energy.
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Overall
, there are 4 major steps starting from uranium mining from the earth to the complete use of the fuel. Linking Words
Additionally
, there are 2 other steps to reuse or bury the remaining elements of that.
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first,
the process commences with collecting uranium from the earth by mining. Linking Words
Next,
it is converted and goes through an enrichment procedure in order to make U-235 fuel pellets. Linking Words
Following
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this
step, those are transported to electricity plants. Linking Words
Further
, those were used to run generators, which is essential for electricity production.
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Then
, those materials are used for four years and after completing Linking Words
this
stage, their energy gets lost. Linking Words
Finally
, the remaining elements go through a procedure where their ability to get re-processed is checked. If it is possible to utilize those again, they go back to the energy plant. Linking Words
Otherwise
, they are stored in containers and later, they get buried in a proper way.Linking Words
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