The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The flow chart illustrates the process of utilizing uranium
while
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producing nuclear energy.
Overall
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, there are 4 major steps starting from uranium mining from the earth to the complete use of the fuel.
Additionally
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, there are 2 other steps to reuse or bury the remaining elements of that. At
first,
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the process commences with collecting uranium from the earth by mining.
Next,
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it is converted and goes through an enrichment procedure in order to make U-235 fuel pellets.
Following
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this
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step, those are transported to electricity plants.
Further
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, those were used to run generators, which is essential for electricity production.
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, those materials are used for four years and after completing
this
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stage, their energy gets lost.
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, the remaining elements go through a procedure where their ability to get re-processed is checked. If it is possible to utilize those again, they go back to the energy plant.
Otherwise
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, they are stored in containers and later, they get buried in a proper way.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nuclear fission
  • Radioactive material
  • Reactor core
  • Control rods
  • Coolant
  • Thermal energy
  • Steam generator
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Spent fuel
  • Radioactive waste
  • Depleted uranium
  • Decommissioning
  • Sustainable energy
  • Nuclear proliferation
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