The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012.

The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012.
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The bar and line charts provide information about the relevance of the average monthly temperatures to swimsuit
sales
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in the city of New York during the first half of 2012.
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, there was an upward trend in New York's weather
temperature
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from January to June 2012.
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, the number of
sales
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of swimming attire was not proportional to the increase in
temperature
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. It is very clear that during the beginning of the year, the average
temperature
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was just slightly above 30
degrees
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Fahrenheit
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. It was the same level in February and each month after that, a steady climb in the city's weather was noticed from 39
degrees
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Fahrenheit
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in March to 65
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Fahrenheit
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in the month of June. Looking closely at the figures for swimwear
sales
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, it is noticeable that from January, there was a 50% rise in
sales
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from $100,000 to $150,000 in March. As the
temperature
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constantly rose each month, a dramatic increase was seen peaking at almost $300,000 during April. Interestingly, bathing suit
sales
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plummeted in May and June at roughly $75,000 and $20,000 respectively just when the
temperature
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was noticeably halfway to 70
degrees
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Fahrenheit
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, temperature, degrees, fahrenheit with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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