Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. You need to explain the following: A)When and where you hired it? B) Describe how the accident happened? C) What kind of action did you take after the accident?

Dear Sir or Madam, I am a regular customer of your car rental company. Recently, I hired
a
Change the article
an
show examples
automobile to spend my holidays in Windsor. I took a motor from your Brampton location
last
Friday to enjoy my vacation for two weeks. I am writing
this
letter to give you the information about the incident. In the morning time, I went to see the lake view which was on the bank of Detroit City. But there was a car driver who crossed the red light and hit the driver's side of my automobile in the intersection. The accident took place on Monday near the University of Windsor.
In addition
, the damage was not major and I called the police immediately so that they could decide who had to pay for the accident.
Moreover
, the police informed the second party that it was his mistake and he had to provide the insurance details.
Lastly
, the police established the other driver's responsibility for the accident, and the second party's insurance company was informed. I request you to please provide me with another vehicle as
this
car will take time to repair so I will finish my holidays and will come back to Brampton safely. Yours faithfully, LS
Submitted by tajinder.panag on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

introduction conclusion present
Ensure the introduction effectively sets the context for the rest of the report.
clear comprehensive ideas
Make sure the main ideas are developed and expanded upon with clear and relatable details.
logical structure
You must provide a clear logical structure to your report, which should include linking words and phrases to help the reader follow your argument.
relevant specific examples
An effective report should include specific examples or data, if available, to substantiate claims made within the text.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: