The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
This
bar chart illustrates the frequency of physical exercise among
men
and
women
of different
age
groups in Australia in 2010.
Overall
, both genders tend to be more physically active as they grow older, with
women
over the
age
of 45 engaging in more physical
activity
than younger
women
. In 2010, over half of Australian
men
(53%) and
women
(47%) between the ages of 15 and 24 participated in regular physical
activity
.
While
women
maintained similar
activity
levels between the ages of 25 and 44,
men
experienced a significant decline in
activity
beyond that
age
. Only 39.5% of
men
aged 35 to 44 engaged in regular exercise,
whereas
a much higher percentage of
women
in the same
age
group (52.5%) participated in physical
activity
.
Conversely
,
women
accounted for nearly 53% of the
age
group, comprising individuals aged 45 to 54. Interestingly,
women
aged 35 to 64 had a higher participation rate in sports training compared to teenagers, with the differences between the youngest and oldest
age
groups being less than 1%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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