Some people think that sport is very important for society. Others, however, argue that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（重复2011 年老题）

There is no doubt that we are spending a huge amount of

money

on different

sport

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events. Though some

people

opine that it is crucial for the communities, others argue that it is

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a relaxation. I support the former statement.

People

who advocate the importance of sport might argue that it is the key

media

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medium

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of refreshment, either mental or physical.

Moreover

, it gives us the opportunity to maintain our health. Those who are directly involved in

this

activity, always remain healthy.

In contrast

, those who are indirectly involved with the games

also

get some benefits, like

a

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great excitement.

According to

the doctors, the primary requirement of becoming healthy is to smile,

whereas

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a

game

helps to get

this

opportunity.

For instance

, every

game

, especially football, cricket or badminton, provides a huge amount of excitement to the spectators.

Therefore

, the

audiences

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get

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the feeling of happiness and

become

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happy.

This

,

however

,

also

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a source of income for some

people

. Lionel Messi,

Cristiano

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and Cristiano

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Ronaldo are

the

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great

example

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of

this

.

Additionally

, it helps

to

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other related

people

, like

committee

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or staff, to earn

money

.

On the other hand

,

according to

the opposite group, sports are out of primary priority which is important to ensure

the

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daily needs. If it is possible to meet the primary demands, secondary demand will come. Playing a

game

does not always

confirms

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the required

money

that

are

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is

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needed to lead a life. After fulfilling the basic demands and getting the spare

times

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, it is possible to spend some quality time by enjoying a

game

.

For example

, after working five consecutive days, employees try to spend some quality time in different ways;

enjoy

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enjoying

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a

game

is one of them. If they need to

involve

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be involved

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in doing overtime , they will not come to enjoy a match. In conclusion, it can be said that sports are always important if we are economically stable. it is not only vital for spending leisure time, but

also

crucial

earning

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a huge amount of

money

.

Consequently

, we cannot ignore the importance of it in our life.