Some people think that sport is very important for society. Others, however, argue that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（重复2011 年老题）

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There is no doubt that we are spending a huge amount of

money

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on different

sport

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events. Though some

people

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opine that it is crucial for the communities, others argue that it is

jus

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just

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a relaxation. I support the former statement.

People

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who advocate the importance of sport might argue that it is the key

media

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of refreshment, either mental or physical.

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, it gives us the opportunity to maintain our health. Those who are directly involved in

this

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activity, always remain healthy.

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, those who are indirectly involved with the games

also

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get some benefits, like

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great excitement.

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the doctors, the primary requirement of becoming healthy is to smile,

whereas

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enjoy

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enjoying

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game

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helps to get

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opportunity.

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, every

game

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, especially football, cricket or badminton, provides a huge amount of excitement to the spectators.

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, the

audiences

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audience

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get

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gets

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the feeling of happiness and

become

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happy.

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however

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also

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a source of income for some

people

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. Lionel Messi,

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and Cristiano

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Ronaldo are

the

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apply

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great

example

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examples

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this

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, it helps

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other related

people

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, like

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committees

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or staff, to earn

money

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according to

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the opposite group, sports are out of primary priority which is important to ensure

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daily needs. If it is possible to meet the primary demands, secondary demand will come. Playing a

game

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does not always

confirms

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the required

money

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that

are

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needed to lead a life. After fulfilling the basic demands and getting the spare

times

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time

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, it is possible to spend some quality time by enjoying a

game

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, after working five consecutive days, employees try to spend some quality time in different ways;

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game

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is one of them. If they need to

involve

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in doing overtime , they will not come to enjoy a match. In conclusion, it can be said that sports are always important if we are economically stable. it is not only vital for spending leisure time, but

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crucial

earning

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for earning

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a huge amount of

money

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, we cannot ignore the importance of it in our life.

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task achievement

Ensure arguments are balanced between both perspectives before giving an opinion.

coherence and cohesion

Use a clear topic sentence for each paragraph to establish the main point clearly.

task achievement

Cite specific, relevant examples to support points for a more persuasive argument.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

347 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Physical activity
Sedentary lifestyle
Chronic diseases
Teamwork
Cultural divides
Revenue generator
Infrastructure
Patriotism
Role models
Commercialization
Recreation
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Some people think that sport is very important for society. Others, however, argue that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（重复2011 年老题）

International communities should act immediately to ensure that all countries reduce their consumption of fossil fuels, e.g. gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Topic: More people today prefer to live alone in comparison to the past. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development . Give your opinion and relevant examples to support your views.

The best way to deal with the rising problem of traﬃc and transportation is by encouraging people to live in cities rather than in suburbs and in the countryside. What are the effects of rapid population growth in the city? How can the quality of life of city dwellers be maintained?

As transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities, some governments encourage businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?