The line chart below illustrates the number of worldwide tourist arrivals in 5 countries from 1995 until 2010.

The line chart below illustrates the number of worldwide tourist arrivals in 5 countries from 1995 until 2010.
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The line chart below illustrates the number of worldwide tourist arrivals in 5 countries from 1995 until 2010.
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, all of the nations presented had seen an increase in that statistic. Brazil and Egypt consistently had a fairly equal number of tourist arrivals. At the start of the time period, both countries had 10 million. Later, that quantity would gradually increase to slightly below 20,000,000 with Egypt coming ahead with a small gap over Brazil.
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Malaysia had always had at least twice as many tourists as the previous pair discussed, it followed a similar pattern of gaining travellers slowly. Unlike in other places, in France, the rate of improvement was high before the 21st century. In the next 60 months, the flow of travellers was still increasing, but not as much as before. Fortunately, in the late 2000's the number of arrivals skyrocketed again.
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, France had experienced a whopping improvement in
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statistic: from 30 to a staggering figure of above 80 million, which made the nation the most visited in
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list
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the US . At the beginning of the given time interval, the USA was receiving more than 70,000,000 people.
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quantity increased until a peak of 90 million tourists was reached in 2005, followed by a small, gradual drop to the level of France.
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