The map shows the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The map illustrates the information about comparison conditions in 1930 and 2010 in Stokford City.
Overall
, the two maps had different functional Linking Words
areas
. The biggest differences are Use synonyms
Farmland
Use synonyms
areas
in 1930 and the Use synonyms
farmland
Use synonyms
areas
lost by 2010.
Regarding the most different, in the year 1930, Stokeford had many Use synonyms
farmland
Use synonyms
areas
. Use synonyms
In addition
, distribution of Linking Words
farmland
at the west of the river and at the east of the river. Use synonyms
According to
maps in 1930, we can see information that closer to Primary Schools were Shops and Post Offices. Linking Words
Moreover
, near of Large house had gardens.
In terms of another map by 2010, we can get information that the Linking Words
Farmland
area missed in 2010. It was clear map of the school could be larger than the school in 1930. Use synonyms
In addition
, near the school had changed, where in 2010, the houses were more than houses in 1930. Linking Words
On the other hand
, Large houses changed to Retirement homes.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas, farmland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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