Nowadays, individuals are taking their families abroad with them on every business trip.　What are the advantages and disadvantages for individuals and their families? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Our current

lifestyle

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is becoming more

work dominated

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work-dominated

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than

family oriented

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family-oriented

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. Because the

scarecity

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scarcity

of finding

better

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a better

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job is

cruisal

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crucial

critical

When taking

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Taking

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families abroad with them on every business trip can

cause

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have

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good

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a good

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and bad influence

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the

familes

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families

family

. When looking at the

advantage

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advantages

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I have some in

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apply

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mind which are, family members

also

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getting

same

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the same

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experience as the individual who took them.

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as they get to know different cultures around the world and

diffrenet

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different

experiences in

short

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a short

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period of time.

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, when going

for

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European countries we can experience rich

western

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Western

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cutlture

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culture

which is

quiet

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quite

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differe

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different

from asian culture like languages, foods, way of dress and

hight standard

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high-standard

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lifestyle

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, it can be

good

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a good

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experince

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experience

for all family members.

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, families

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need to

apart

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be apart

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from each other few weeks or months because

work

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of work

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. They can

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spend

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spent

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spend

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their quality time whenever or wherever they want.

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, I would say there are lots of

long term

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disadvantages could cause to

family

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the family

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as if they have children

then

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they couldn't have a stable

lifestyle

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as if children are studying

then

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their education

unstable

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is unstable

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due to

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the frequent travelling,

also

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they

couldn't

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aren't

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able to

spent

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time with

thier

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their

similar age group or friends.

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best to give them a stable

lifestyle

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. In the

meantime

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meantime,

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if the particular family have elderly people it's

definetly

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definitely

not good for their health.

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to conclude

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there are

lot

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disadvantages

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of disadvantages

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than

advantage

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advantages

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taking

abroad

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apply

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family members.

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of taking them for each business trip only prefer

nessesary

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necessary

one

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ones

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best to choose

the

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stable environment for

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then

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their

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family

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apply

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abroad.

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task achievement

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

272 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Work-life balance
Cultural exposure
Logistical challenges
Educational opportunities
Financial cost
Adaptability
Family unity
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Broadened horizons
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Distraction
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