Nowadays, individuals are taking their families abroad with them on every business trip. What are the advantages and disadvantages for individuals and their families? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Our current
lifestyle
is becoming more
work dominated
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than
family oriented
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. Because the
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scarcity
of finding
better
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a better
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job is
cruisal
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crucial
critical
.
When taking
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families abroad with them on every business trip can
cause
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good
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and bad influence
in
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on
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the
familes
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families
family
. When looking at the
advantage
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I have some in
my
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mind which are, family members
also
getting
same
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the same
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experience as the individual who took them.
Such
as they get to know different cultures around the world and
diffrenet
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different
experiences in
short
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a short
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period of time.
For instance
, when going
for
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European countries we can experience rich
western
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Western
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cutlture
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culture
which is
quiet
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differe
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different
from asian culture like languages, foods, way of dress and
hight standard
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lifestyle
.
Therefore
, it can be
good
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a good
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experince
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experience
for all family members.
Also
, families
no
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need to
apart
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be apart
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from each other few weeks or months because
work
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of work
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. They can
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spent
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their quality time whenever or wherever they want.
On the other hand
, I would say there are lots of
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disadvantages could cause to
family
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the family
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.
Such
as if they have children
then
they couldn't have a stable
lifestyle
.
Such
as if children are studying
then
their education
unstable
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is unstable
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due to
the frequent travelling,
also
they
couldn't
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able to
spent
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time with
thier
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their
similar age group or friends.
Hence
best to give them a stable
lifestyle
. In the
meantime
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if the particular family have elderly people it's
definetly
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definitely
not good for their health.
Therefore
,
to conclude
there are
lot
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disadvantages
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of disadvantages
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than
advantage
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advantages
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by
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to
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taking
abroad
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apply
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family members.
Instead
of taking them for each business trip only prefer
nessesary
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necessary
one
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ones
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.
Otherwise
best to choose
the
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a
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stable environment for
then
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their
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family
in
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apply
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abroad.
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  • Work-life balance
  • Cultural exposure
  • Logistical challenges
  • Educational opportunities
  • Financial cost
  • Adaptability
  • Family unity
  • Cultural shock
  • Broadened horizons
  • Disruption
  • Distraction
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