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When we meet someone for the first time, we generally decide very quickly what kind of person we think they are and if we like them or not. Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

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 nature has a superficial way to judge when on a person in the first meeting
according to
 some
characteristic
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characteristics
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such
 as the general outfit, the way of speaking ,or even interaction. and
this
 way is obviously
wrong
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 method which can lead to unfairness to people.In
this
 essay, I will discuss
this
 perspective. some people have kind of shyness and lack
of
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interaction when sitting with new society or people
while
 others
intending
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which
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that they
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 may
have
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not have
it
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. let me illustrate
this
 idea, nowadays most
of
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the
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relationships are facing a problem after
long
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 time of
realtion
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realignment
this
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caused by
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 real phenomena on the other partner.
In addition
, the good behaviour
amd
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and
 phenomena of the person like kindness and generously could
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 after
along
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a long
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 time with
a
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specific situations
so
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this
leading
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 to say, let the actions discovery is the golden in individuals. In
nutshell
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, the first
impersion
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impression
 is
usally
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usually
 wrong . Taking your time to explore what
inside
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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