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The table below shows the monthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The table below shows the monthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The table below shows the monthly
expenditure
 of an average
Australian
 family in 1991 and 2001. In 1991,
Australian
 family
expenditure
 on other goods and services
highest
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was highest
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 on the top, the second is food
about
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at about
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 155$, the third is housing at 95$
while
 electricity and water at 75$ and transport at 70$.
Last
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The last
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 one is clothing about 30$ the smallest in the chart, which is they spend a little. In 2001, these things had
change
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changed
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 dramatically. Spending on electricity and water
was increase
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was increasing
was increased
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in
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apply
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from 75$ to 120$. Next was other goods and services went up from 250$ to 270$.
Then
was
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apply
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housing and food had increased
5$
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by 5$
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 for each one.
However
, spending on clothing and transport was reduced from 30$ to 20$ and 70$ to 45$. Especially
expenditure
 on clothing and transport had
change
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changed
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 considerably in Australia.
Finally
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Finally,
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Australian
expenditure
 on other goods and services the most and the least is clothing.
Total
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The total
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Australian
dollar
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dollars
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 per month in 1991
was went
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went
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 up in 2001 from 675$ to 715$.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words expenditure, australian with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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