The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital between 1960,1980 and 2000.
The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital between 1960,1980 and 2000.
In 1960,the hospital was built close to a main road and next to
shopping
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the shopping
a shopping
centre
.A large area behind the hospital was turned into a car
park
.Beside
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car
parking
there was Farmland.
By 1980,the shopping Add a comma
parking,
centre
had been knocked down in order to make way for two additional hospital buildings which became cancer
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a cancer
centre
and pharmacy.Therefore
,the Farmland had been replaced by Nursing School
. In 2000,the main hospital building remained unchanged,but the cancer centre
was expanded to cover entire
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the entire
school
.Then
,the car
park
was split up into two so that it provided a smaller car
park
and small
nursing Correct article usage
a small
school
.
During this
period, the hospital has increased in size and, in addition
to a new nursing school
, a cancer centre
has been created and extended. As the
result,the capacity of the Correct article usage
a
car
park
has been reduced by a
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