The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart presents the
number
of representatives of two genders
students
who studied six arts-based academic programs at a higher education institution in the UK in 2011. In general, if we count the total
number
of
students
attending each discipline, Linguistics, English language and literature, Arts & Design and Communication and media studies are frequently visited by
students
,
whereas
Psychology History and Archaeology are fewer favourite
students
subjects. English language and literature had the highest enrolment, with approximately 250 male and 230 female
students
. The second most popular lecture is Linguistics with nearly 180 male and 240 female
students
. The third study that attracted learners was Communication & Media lessons, with around 175 male and 155 female undergraduates.
On the other hand
, the
number
of
students
that enrolled in Philosophy was over 150 for female and approximately a third for male
students
.
Finally
, in the Art & Design course, male
students
were around 153 people. The
number
of female
students
who enrolled on the latter course was marginally higher, with just 5-7 additional
students
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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  • gender imbalances
  • percentages
  • comparison
  • balanced distribution
  • data
  • figures
  • trends
  • popular
  • least popular
  • subject choices
  • analyze
  • overview
  • summarize
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