Under British and Australia laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record . This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

Several barristers supposed that all the defendant's past criminal
records
should be given to a
jury
before they make a decision about the particular illegal case.
While
this
may work to a certain extent, I think it
also
has its dark sides.
To begin
with, it is understandable why giving past criminal profiles is a feasible option. The reason is that
according to
the past
records
of law-breakers, authorities can make
a more precise decisions
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more precise decisions
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.
And
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then
, the
jury
depends on the perfect alibis of
crime
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the crime
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and gives a proper verdict.
For example
, many cases in Vietnam
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tackled by giving past criminal documents.
Therefore
, many
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want to give the previous profiles of the crime to the
jury
.
On the other hand
, there are many reasons why authorities should not be given past criminal documents. It is
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that the juries can have knowledge about the condition of people who took part in unlawful activities and after that, they may make an unbiased decision.
For instance
, with a wealthy condition, the
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who
want
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to escape from punishment can offer the
jury
an inducement.
In addition
, all defendant's criminal
records
also
give the judge
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an unfair mind. The boards can rely on their emotions and give the trumped-up charges for the innocent.
As a result
, the people who are miscarriages of justice can not find out their justice. In conclusion,
this
statement has its advantages and disadvantages. Giving previous criminal
records
affects remarkably on making a precise and equal
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decision
design
leading to a fair society.
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