The chart below shows the amount of money spent on consumer goods in two different countries in 2010.
The vertical bar illustrates information about spending
money
for daily needs in the United Kingdom
and France
by 2010. The chart's value used pounds
sterling in several categories such
as cars
, computers, books, perfume
, and cameras
.
In general, the picture gives facts that in the United Kingdom
and France
, the highest expenditure was on cars
. Moreover
, the lowest spending money
was different in each country, where in the United Kingdom
for perfume
rather than in France
cameras
.
Regarding the United Kingdom
's consumer goods in 2010, we can see the spend
Replace the word
spent
money
for daily consumption of almost more than 300,000 pounds
sterling, where cars
, computers, books, and cameras
; were approximately 452000, 350000, 402000, and 352000 pounds
sterling, respectively. Meanwhile, some people only spend money
on perfume
140000 pounds
sterling.
In terms of France
, activities need
by 2010, it was clear that almost spent Wrong verb form
needed
money
on modern goods such
as cars
and computers, whereas
the spent money
on daily routines was 400000 and 375000 pounds
sterling, respectively. Furthermore
, some people in France
only needed money
for other consumer goods such
as books, perfume
, and cameras
. It was 300000, 200000, and 150000 pounds
sterling, respectively.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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