Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.

Some people believe that it is barbaric to confine

animals

to

zoos

,

while

others say that they guard wild

animals

. In my point of view, under no circumstances can wild

animals

stayed

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here. On the one hand, people have comprehensible reasons for thinking that

zoos

are

acceptable

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option for protecting wild

animals

. There are some species in nature that are

last

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members of their species and it can be dangerous for them to stay in nature.

For instance

, polar bears are in danger because of climate change. As climate change causes , polar bears struggle to find food and less food means less energy.

This

problem can affect their growth and reproduction.

Zoos

have necessary precautions to prevent

such

situations.

On the other hand

, I would agree with those who believe that

zoos

are cruel and should be closed down. It is

obvious

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fact that

zoos

are not natural places and their territories are limited for wild

animals

.

Animals

cannot move around or behave naturally in these places.

As a result

of

this

, it can affect them physically

negative

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and they can become depressed.

For example

, lions are creatures that need

natural

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a natural

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environment to live and staying at

zoos

lead

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to them

become

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stressed.

In addition

, there are

evidences

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evidence

pieces of evidence

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that

significant

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percentage of

zoos

use special drugs to pacify

animals

.

This

kind of

sedatives

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are

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detrimental to

health

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the health

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of

animals

. Most

of

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zoos

use

tranquilizier

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tranquillizer

tranquillizers

on tigers to soothe them. In consequence,

bodies

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of tigers become completely numb. In conclusion,

although

some

zoos

help endangered species to be preserved in nature,

much

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many

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more of them affect wild

animals

negatively. I believe that

zoos

should be

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shut

shutted

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down for clear reasons, especially because they use drugs on

animals