The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
It's not a secret that
the
every country in the world Remove the article
apply
have
many Change the verb form
has
households
. The United States of America isn't exception
. We have a graph that gives Add an article
an exception
the
information about the Correct article usage
apply
number
of households
in the US by their every year
Replace the word
yearly
income
in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
The first part of statistics about the households
in 2007. A quarter of hundred
million Correct article usage
a hundred
households
had income
less than twenty five
Add a hyphen
twenty-five
thousand
United States Dollars. Number
of Change the article
A number
The number
households
with better income
, just between $25.000 and half a hundred thousand
USD, was more than 27 millions
. Change to singular
million
Income
of around 20 million Correct article usage
The income
households
are
started from $50.000 and reached Unnecessary verb
apply
to
more than seventy Change preposition
apply
thousands
. Change to singular
thousand
This
was the index for 2007.
If we talk about 2011 we will see that the number
of households
with very different incomes in
almost equal. Correct your spelling
is
Households
with income
around hundred
Correct article usage
a hundred
thousand
dollars was
the Correct subject-verb agreement
were
last
in 2011 by their quantity. Families with more than hundred
Correct article usage
a hundred
thousand
dollars practically reached the number
30 millions
, but not took it Change to singular
million
at
full.
The graph Change preposition
in
of
the year Change preposition
for
of
2015 Change preposition
apply
is looking
different than any others. Of Wrong verb form
looks
course
there is a Add a comma
course,
simillar
Correct your spelling
similar
points
, Change the noun form
point
such
as the number
of families with income
less than half a thousand
USD, but, on the other
hand
quantity of Add the comma(s)
hand,
housekeepings
with Fix the agreement mistake
housekeeping
income
Correct article usage
an income
more
than $100.000 just rocketed to the value of 32 Change preposition
of more
millions
or so.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
million
this
bunch of statistics is only about the United States. If we'll
speak about any other countries we definitely will have Verb problem
we
an
another information and other numbers.Remove the article
apply
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words households, number, income, thousand with synonyms.
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