The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002,
the bar chart gives us information about the total calls with national and international next 4 years in 1999 call with domestic and International , the amount of
phone
calls in England , between 1995 and 2002
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number of phone
overall
,it can be seen that the amount of calling with local by fixedline
was really popular over the period more than others ,Correct your spelling
fixed line
fixed-line
however
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,
as well as
by mobile increased ,
refers to the most relevent
calling which was local calls , the levels of makingCorrect your spelling
relevant
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the
phone
in 1995 stood at 70 minutes that
was the highestCorrect pronoun usage
which
numbers
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number
compearing
to others in the same year, Correct your spelling
comparing
although
this
number was incearse
steadily , afterCorrect your spelling
increased
increase
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the
this
level peacked
at 90 minutes . after the following Correct your spelling
peaked
packed
years
the quantity of telephone calls Add a comma
years,
were
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was
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declined
greadually
.
regards to Correct your spelling
gradually
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of calling Fix the agreement mistake
other kinds
such
asAdd an article
a
phone
calls rose slowly during the period 1995 and 2002 , if we noted
individuals have used Wrong verb form
note
mobile
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the mobile
phone
more and more , Fix the agreement mistake
phones
for instance
in 1995 citizens made a phone
by their phone
just for abour
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about
labour
minuts
that was the lowest numbers, even though Correct your spelling
minutes
this
amount was dramatic jump to 50 billions
minutes in 2002 .Change to singular
billion
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