The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The map, which depicts in great detail, illustrates a series of hypothetical and significant changes in Islip town over a period of years.
Furthermore
, these variations between figures Linking Words
are representing
the future situation of an existing site.
Wrong verb form
represent
Overall
, the village will develop substantially from a non-developed urban area to a modern and equipped one that will be ready to ensure their Linking Words
inhabitants
needs.
At present, the mentioned location has a large main road connecting the western and southern parts of the place. Change noun form
inhabitant's
inhabitants'
This
street seems to be a busy oneLinking Words
,
because it is surrounded by shops Remove the comma
apply
at
both sides. To the north of the road, there is countryside that remains unspoilt. Contrarily, there are houses Change preposition
on
to
the Change preposition
in
south
part. Replace the word
southern
Also
, focusing on children’s needs, there is a school and a park Linking Words
to
both sides of the housing buildings.
In relation to the planned development, some changes will be registered. Change preposition
on
For instance
, the main road will become available for pedestrians only, Linking Words
while
a dual carriageway will be constructed around Islip. Linking Words
Also
, a bus station, a shopping Centre, a car park and modern houses will be built Linking Words
to
the northern part of the location. Change preposition
in
On the contrary
, some other elements will be preserved. As an example, the shops situated to the south of the main street and the park will maintain their original location.Linking Words
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