The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
The map, which depicts in great detail, illustrates a series of hypothetical and significant changes in Islip town over a period of years.
Furthermore
, these variations between figures
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the future situation of an existing site.
Overall
, the village will develop substantially from a non-developed urban area to a modern and equipped one that will be ready to ensure their
inhabitants
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needs. At present, the mentioned location has a large main road connecting the western and southern parts of the place.
This
street seems to be a busy one
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because it is surrounded by shops
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both sides. To the north of the road, there is countryside that remains unspoilt. Contrarily, there are houses
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the
south
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part.
Also
, focusing on children’s needs, there is a school and a park
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both sides of the housing buildings. In relation to the planned development, some changes will be registered.
For instance
, the main road will become available for pedestrians only,
while
a dual carriageway will be constructed around Islip.
Also
, a bus station, a shopping Centre, a car park and modern houses will be built
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the northern part of the location.
On the contrary
, some other elements will be preserved. As an example, the shops situated to the south of the main street and the park will maintain their original location.
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