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The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015.

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The table provides information about the
employment
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 and income percentage differences among eight nations in Europe in the year 2015.
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, there was a huge difference in the
employment
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, education and income figures among the given countries. In some nations, the percentage of university degree holders was not proportional to the
employment
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rate
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. It is noticeable that of all eight locations, Norway had the largest figure in
employment
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rate
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 at 74.8%, proportionally, it
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 accounted for the highest number of individuals with a college background at 43.2% and the top most income earner with 41,483
pounds
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.
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 was followed by the UK and Luxembourg, where 41.6% and 41.1% of its citizens had a college education,
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 the
rate
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 of job-secured citizens was 72.7% and 66.1% respectively.
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, the countries of Austria, Bulgaria, Greece, Latvia, and Portugal had a high working
rate
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 despite the illustrated low percentage in education. Looking closely at the figures for Portugal, a mere 22.9% of its citizens ranging from 25-64 years old were college degree holders. In spite of
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, the country showed a high job
rate
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 of 63.9%.
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, Luxembourg was second in terms of compensation with 34,320
pounds
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, followed by Austria and the UK with 23,260
pounds
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 and 20,945
pounds
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words employment, rate, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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