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The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The table illustrates the cost of mineral
water
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 (up to and over 125
KL
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) with the average expenses per house chores in five different cities in Australia.
Overall
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, the price of
water
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 up to 125
KL
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 in
Sydney
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 is the highest, two times more than
Adelaide
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 and
Perth
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 as the lowest. Meanwhile, the
water
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 consumption over 125
KL
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prices
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 is dramatically different compared to the former. It is
Perth
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 with the highest
prices
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while
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Brisbane
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 is the lowest. In terms of the usage of
water
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 up to 125
KL
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,
Sydney
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 overtook the cost of more than 200% of
Adelaide
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 and
Perth
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, at $0.98.
Similarly
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,
Brisbane
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 and Melbourne are almost two times more than the lowest at exactly $0,81 and $0,78, respectively. Meanwhile,
Adelaide
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 and
Perth
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 share the same amount of
prices
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, at $0.42, it is
also
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 the lowest of
prices
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 among other cities in Australia. Regarding the use of
water
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that is
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 over 125
KL
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,
Perth
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 is the most expensive compared to others, at $1,50., followed by
Adelaide
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 at precisely $1.00. The
prices
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 of
water
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 in
Sydney
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 and Melbourne are not different. Meanwhile, the cost of
water
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 in
Brisbane
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 increased by $0.03%.
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, the average bill per household of the five different cities is
Perth
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 as the highest with $332, followed by
Sydney
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 at $319.
Adelaide
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 and
Brisbane
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 have a slight difference of only $2.
Finally
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, Melbourne is the cheapest at $253.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, kl, sydney, adelaide, perth, prices, brisbane with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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