The graph illustrates the various activities done by aged people (reading, hiking, theatre, watching tv, surfing the internet) in the USA to spend their leisure time from 1980 to 2010.

The graph illustrates the various activities done by aged people (reading, hiking, theatre, watching

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, surfing the internet) in the USA to spend their leisure time from 1980 to 2010.

Overall

, it can be seen that approximately all activities experienced an upward trend

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while

going to the

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decreased slightly over the period.

To begin

with, most elderly people preferred to watch TV between 1980 and 2000, before dropping sharply to less than 10% in 2010.The rate of reading and surfing the internet increased by 10%,before the popularity of reading went down being 20% in 2000.Both reading and spending time on the internet sharply increased over the

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10 years. With regard

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hiking, it was at the bottom of the graph, which was just 20% in 1980.

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hiking increased considerably in a linear way reaching

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peak (80%) which became the most popular free time activity in 2010.

Lastly

, going to the theater dropped by 20% and increased

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somewhere in the vicinity of 45%.