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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following graph
illutrates
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illustrates
 the
propotion
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proportion
 of
population
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the population
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 aged 65 between the
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years
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 1940 to 2040.
This
 is summarised between three different
countries
 over six
decades
. In
this
graph
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 the percentage of
japan
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Japan
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 has
been
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drastically increased over the six
decades
 which stands first in the graph. The second
propotion
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proportion
proposition
 of
population
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the population
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 aged 65 years and over is in
sweden
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Sweden
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 and
the
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 initial stage USA had a boom in the
population
by
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ver the
decades
 it
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the
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third place
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compared
 to the other two
countries
. In 1940 japan had
the
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 percentage of 5 and it has increased to 27 percent in 2040. Which has a
tremondous
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tremendous
 growth over the course of years in the
population
 of people aged 65 and more. Sweden had
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percentage
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 of
population
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the population
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 in 1940 and
in
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1940 it
has
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reached 25
percent
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per cent
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 of
growth
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the growth
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 in 2040.
Initially
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 the
popullation
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population
 of
USA
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the USA
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 arose in 1940 but it has a decline in 2040 to about 23
percent
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per cent
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. It is clearly understood that over six
decades
 all
the
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three
countries
has
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have
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 faced
the
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a
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 gradual increase and decrease in the
population
 of people
in
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apply
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and
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apply
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over 65 years. But none of the
countries
 faced the
drop down
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 of the
poupulation
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population
 below 20 in 2040. So it is considered that all the three
countries
 maintain a good
poupulation
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population
 of old people.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, countries, decades with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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