In some countries, health care and education are only partially funded by the government. Some people argue that the government should be responsible for covering the full cost of these services. Do you support or oppose the opinion? Explain your position.

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are vital pillars of a

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development and productivity. People hold different views about whether it’s the responsibility of the

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to fully fund both the

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. Some agree that

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should be fully funded by the

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there are others that disagree with it. In my opinion, I support that

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should be fully funded by the

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and my reasons will be stated below.

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are saddled with the responsibility of making sure that their citizens are comfortable and productive.

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can only be possible when there is adequate provision of basic amenities, of which

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and

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services are among. A

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system will bring about attainment among its

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enhance social productivity.

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when the

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have to worry about their

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knowing fully well the

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has

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for free

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delivery for it masses,

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will enable them to be able to go to the hospital on time when they are sick without the fear of not

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able to afford the payment.

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them to get treatment on time without the condition aggravating.

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would be happy, allowing them to contribute their own quota to the

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happily, paying their taxes effectively and working fully for the growth of the

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, a quality

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made free for all will empower the

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will prevent them from being a liability to the

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but rather a useful resource to the

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, increasing the workforce capacity of the

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, free

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for all will give both the rich and poor equal opportunity and enable both to be equally educated.

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allowing more people who would not have been able to go to school because of their financial capacity all to have a chance to be educated.

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it will give all citizens a

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at the employment market which would not be possible if some are not able to provide for their

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.

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with free

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comes entrepreneurship empowerment. In conclusion, a fully funded

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and educational system won’t only benefit the citizens but

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the

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at large. There will be so much productivity when individuals are healthy, educated and able to work.