The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The plans illustrate the development of the
town
Brinden
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between 1800 and 2000.
Overall
,there were more structures erected to
further
commercialise and expand the
town
. The most noticeable features were the reduction of the space for forests and
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eradication of the farmland with livestock in order to construct industries, a park and gradually enlarge the hilly village for workers. In 1800, the area was in its most natural state with a body of water,
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agricultural areas one for arable farming to the upper left and the other for animals to the lower right corner. It was
also
clear that there was
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a
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woodland
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the upper right corner and the main
town
of Brinden
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the lower left corner. After a century,the arable farming area, river and Brindel retained their locations, but the woodlands
reudced
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reduced
in size and on the land available for livestock, a Hill with a small
town
for workers emerged and industrial infrastructure was established. In 2000,the city soon became fully industrialised with more industries and a bigger Bun Hill for workers in the same location
while
a park was built between the stour and the available woodlands.
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