The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps show how the

town

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of Westley has changed since 1815.

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we can see that the

town

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has become more urban and developed than in the past. The

town

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has

been

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become much less green than in the past and is now more modern.

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example

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now there are no fields and

instead

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a train line has been built with a train station and cinema. The wood in the centre of the

town

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has been

cutted

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cut

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down and has been replaced by a housing estate. There have been

making

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other changes

with

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accomodation

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accommodation

in the

town

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. All of the houses that

were

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surrounded the market square and

town

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hall have

also

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been knocked out and turned into

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residential and business

area

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areas

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with a

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residential, business and shopping area at the new end of the road. Other buildings in Westley are all different. The church has been demolished and there is now a shopping centre in its place. There is a sports centre and museum on the site of the coach inn and Lord

Westleys

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Westley

House have been turned

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a pub and hotel.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

188 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

residential area
amenities
thoroughfare
connectivity
industrial development
factory
public amenities
recreational facilities
educational facilities
residential expansion
apartment blocks
commercial activity
shopping centers
restaurants
single-family homes
development
open field
noticeable change
replacing
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