The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000
The pie charts compare the quantities of
electricity
fueled by different types of resources between Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000. It is obvious that the
electricity
production of the two nations witnessed significant growth over the period shown, in which coal played an increasing role in Australia,
whereas
nuclear power accounted for the majority of producing
electricity
in France two decades later. In 1980, half of
electricity
was generated by coal, which rose to more than three quarters after 20 years, at 130
units
. The trend was the same for hydropower, and the figure approximately doubled, increasing to 36
units
.
By contrast
, there was a sharp decline in generating
electricity
by oil and natural gas, which became almost negligible, and there was no data recorded for nuclear power. The amount of
electricity
powered by nuclear grew significantly with the figure rising from 15 to 126
units
over the 20-year period in the European country, which outnumbered twofold of the rest of the sources combined. The
units
of
electricity
produced by coal (25
units
in 1980) and oil (20
units
in 1980) nearly remained unchanged, at 25
units
respectively in 2000,
whereas
the proportions in the
overall
production were losing in popularity.
However
, the quantities of
electricity
supplied by natural gas and hydropower were only 2
units
respectively, in 2000 showing a marked decrease of 23 and 3
units
compared with the previous year’s figures.
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