The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The given bar chart illustrates
proportion
of accommodation ownership in two different UK countries from 1918 to 2011. Add an article
the proportion
Overall
, the percentage of properties
owned was rising, while
that of rented ones was falling.
Majority
of accommodation in 1918 was rented by almost 80% of households, Correct article usage
The majority
whereas
the remaining 20% of them owned it. The figure dropped by around 10% for rented properties
over the period of 21 years and remained stable until 1953. In the following years, the figure consistently climbed down until the proportion of rented properties
was the same as that of owned properties
in 1971.
After 1971, the number of rented properties
maintained its downward trend and plummeted to a little over 30% in 2001. On the contrary
, there were a total of almost 70% Change preposition
of household
household
Fix the agreement mistake
households
own
accommodation, which was the highest proportion throughout the period. Wrong verb form
owned
However
, the figure retracted in the final year resulting in about 65% and 35% for owned and rented properties
respectively.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words properties with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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