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The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
households
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 divided into two kinds of accommodation namely owned and rented in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
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, the percentage of
households
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 owned had increased,
while
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 the rented
households
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 experienced a decrease until the end of the period. In detail, it can be seen that in 1918 the portion of the owned
households
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 was the biggest about 75%.
However
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, the rented
households
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 were just over 20%. The proportion of owned
households
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 experienced a decline until 1971,
on the other hand
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, the number of rented
households
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 increased dramatically and reached the same percentage as owned
households
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 around 50%.
In contrast
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, in 1981 the percentage of owned
households
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 rose by around 60% and slightly increased until the end of the period, meanwhile rented
households
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 saw a decrease of about 40%, and experienced a gradual decrease until 2011 of approximately 35% or just under 40%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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