The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The maps display how the rural
area
of Ryemouth has changed from 1995 to nowadays. The village has not changed significantly,
however
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there have been several differences over a 28-year period. The most noticeable ones
being
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the total elimination of the fishing industry, the cutting down of the forest
park
, the increases in accommodations and roads, and the construction of sports facilities. In 1995, in the south of the village, there was a fishing port and
the
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fishing market. Opposite the fishing market there used to be shops lined up. On the
north-east
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part of the
area
, there was farmland and a nearby forest
park
. The residential
area
on the
north-west
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was situated along the main road connected to the coast, with thirteen houses, four on a smaller side street. In the present map, several changes have occurred over the years, from fishing facilities to housing. Fish markets have been replaced by apartments, and across the road, shops have been given way to restaurants. In the south-east, a small café and hotel remain untouched, but a car
park
has been added alongside the hotel. The farming
area
has been transformed into a golf course, and the forest
park
has been replaced by a tennis field. The residential
area
has been expanded with the construction of new houses.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • village
  • Ryemouth
  • 1995
  • present
  • houses
  • small school
  • residential areas
  • amenities
  • population
  • increased
  • growth
  • expansion
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