Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

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both

traffic

and accommodation

problems

. Some people believe

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can be tackled by moving huge

companies

, factories and their workers to the countryside. In my point of view, transferring the process of production through fabrics

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will contribute to

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more negative conditions than before.

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elaborately and provide feasible examples. Let’s begin with the disadvantages of transferring the operational systems of big

companies

to

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rural areas in

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field.

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some people opine that

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can reduce the

problems

of providing

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houses

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and reducing

traffic

,

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will contribute to

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new

problems

such

as deforestation,

traffic

congestion, and toxic contamination.

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, the relocation of PT. Rum from Jakarta to

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Sukoharjo that it is initiated to reduce

problems

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in

traffic

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an example. Those

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affect

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not only

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the

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availability of green spaces in Sukoharjo but

also

the agricultural sectors face new

problems

by contaminating

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toxic.

Hence

, it is undeniable that moving big

companies

operations to

countryside

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the countryside

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is not a sensible solution. Turning to the other drawback, it is true that producers should allocate more expenditure to move their fabrics and need more transportation budget to deliver their products to distributors. The negative snowball effect is the price of

product

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will rise and it will emphasize the opportunities among poor

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families

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to buy

that products

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. To illustrate, PT. So Nice Indonesia

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that if they move their operations to new small cities, they will allocate more than 70% of their

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to establish their fabric in Boyolali.

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, their director

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the

decisions

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to use modern technology to reduce human labour, and it can reduce the

traffic

and housing

problems

in Surakarta.

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, it requires other innovations

that

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more proper than transforming large

companies

to marginal areas.

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, moving big

companies

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companies'

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operations to

countryside

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the countryside

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is not

a

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best

solutions

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, even

it

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will create new

problems

.

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, to deal with

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those

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problems

big

companies

should create

innovation

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that offer win-win solutions in terms of optimizing the advancement of technologies

products

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and products

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.