The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The column chart illustrates the
proportion
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of individuals in Britain donating
portion
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a portion
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of their salary to donation
according to
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their age in two distinct years.
Overall
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, willingness to give money to charity was higher in 1990 compared with 2010 for the three first groups.
However
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, for individuals between 51 and 65 and more, a lower
proportion
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of donations was reported for the year 1990 rather than in 2010. In terms of the youngest group, the
percent
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percentage
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of
people
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who donated money to charity in 1990 stood at well over 15%,
while
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that in 2010 was lower at approximately 7%.
Similarly
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, for the second group, the figure for individuals giving their money to charity was just over 30%,
whereas
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that of 2010 was lower at just under 25%. In 1990, the
proportion
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of
people
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aged 36-50 peaked at nearly 42%, the figure in 2010 for the same age was 35%, though.
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, from the 51, the
proportion
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of citizens in 2010 exceeded that of 1990 and the
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percentage
of
people
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peaked at nearly 40% in 2019 among
people
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from 51 to 65.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • charitable donations
  • age range/bracket/group
  • percentage (%)
  • 20-year period
  • British people
  • trends
  • increase/decrease
  • significant change
  • donation patterns
  • remained stable
  • highest/lowest
  • observe
  • compare
  • summarize
  • comment on
  • relevant features
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