The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
The table chart shows the percentage of babies who were born in 1981, 1986,1996 and 2006 and mothers were aged between 40 and 44 years in Australia.
Overall
, it can be seen that the percentage of females who had no kids, one child and two children
sharply increased between 1981 and 2006. In contrast
, the percentage of women who had three kids and four or more declined in the years 1986, 1996 and 2006.
To begin
with, in 2006, the highest proportion was women who had two children
about 38.2 per cent
. Followed by three children
, no babies and one child about 21.5 per cent
, none and one child respectively. The lowest was four or more accounting for 11 per cent
.
In 1981, two kids were higher than others at 29 per cent
,and four or more and three children
were 27.6
per Change preposition
at 27.6
cent
and 27.4 per cent
. But the lowest was 7.6 per cent
.Submitted by itchayatop31 on
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