The crime rate will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes. Do you agree or disagree?

The innovations in Science and

technology

would make it simpler to abate the

crimes

by its ability to foresee and

inhibite

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inhibit

inhibited

inhibits

criminal

activities

.I totally agree with

this

statement because

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efforts

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will be required to detect the Lawbreakers

due to

the inexpensive

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monitoring

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and

also

, criminal

offenses

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can be checked with the introduction of the futuristic law-keepers. The main reason why I believe that

technology

could make it easier to find illegal

activities

is because many inexpensive hi-tech tools will make

easier

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for law enforcement agencies to keep a tab on the population.

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increased aerial and ground surveillance devices could aid police

to detect

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unlawful

activities

easily.It is true that

such

gadgets are available but I anticipate that advancements in Science would find inexpensive solutions to bestow numerous impoverished governments to install cameras in every corner of

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; who,

otherwise

, struggle to accomplish

this

due to

their fiscal constraints.

In addition

, I think that it would be effortless to deter crime rate because we could witness robots as

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futuristic law enforcers curbing

crimes

more efficiently compared to their real counterparts. The machines would eliminate the inherent safety risks and physical limitations of our law-keepers and

therefore

, are going to be more skilled at thwarting

crimes

.

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, A robust

steel bodied

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mechanical police humanoid can take several

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of bullets without any significant damage, which leads to their relentless ferociousness to ward off criminals. In conclusion,

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completely agree that the progress in

technology

will deter criminals and reduce the crime rate.

This

is because the

spohisticated

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sophisticated

tools of

technology

would empower our authorities to oversee any criminal

activities

,

while

humanoids will provide more effective ways to curb

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crimes

.