The following pie charts show the main modes of transportation people used to to travel to university for work or study in 2004 and 2009.
The pie charts illustrate the kinds of transportation people used
such
as cars, bus
, walking , Fix the agreement mistake
buses
train
, and Fix the agreement mistake
trains
bicycle
from 2004 to 2009.
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bicycles
Overall
, while
in 2004 the most
methods they used was represented by cars and Fix the agreement mistake
apply
bus
, in 2009 bus
become
the most popular type of transportation.
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became
Firstly
, meanwhile
in Add a comma
meanwhile,
2004
the Add a comma
2004,
bus
represented only 33% of methods
, in 2009 it increased to 46% , becoming the main way to move . Correct article usage
the methods
Secondly
, walking and train
had a small growth over the given period , from 3% and 4% to 4% and 6% , Wrong verb form
training
respectivily
.
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respectively
Furthermore
, the biggest decline has occured
in cars , starting from 51% of Correct your spelling
occurred
methods
the Correct article usage
the methods
pople
used , and ending at 28% . Correct your spelling
people
Nevertheless
, the bicycle shows slight
increased Correct article usage
a slight
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of aroud
aroud
7% during the given period.Correct your spelling
around
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