The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise th einformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps depict the developments of

road

access which took place in the urban hospital between 2007 and 2010.

Overall

, a

comparsion

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comparison

of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from an underdeveloped hospital to a

develop

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hospital. In the year 2007, the hospital had a simple

infrastucture

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infrastructure

with lots of bus-stop but during the next 3 years, the hospital saw a number of significant changes. The most noticeable is that all of the

bus-stop

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bus stops

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near the hospital main

road

being

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are being

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demolished . The car parking for public and staff have

devided

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divided

into a new specific location.

Moreover

, a new

infrastucture

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infrastructure

has

developed

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been developed

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with

bus

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the bus

a bus

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station and

road

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a road

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roundabout

has

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created.

In contrast

, only place of the city hospital remained. The

bus-stop

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bus stop

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was cleared and converted into

bus

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the bus

a bus

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station .

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apply

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the intersection of the city

road

was replaced by a circular

road

structure.

Furthermore

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apply

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the east part of the hospital

transform

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has transformed

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into a general people vehicle parking. A new bus station was

also

constructed and it connects the city

road

roundabout with the hospital

road

roundabout.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
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16Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

181 words

6.50

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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