Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Many people choose not to consume either

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or

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. They agree that it can give benefits for their health and

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.

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and

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of the writer.

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with, people choose

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vegetarian because it has positive effects on their health. When someone chooses to live completely without any

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or

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, they can maintain their weight, body shape, and blood pressure.

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, as human beings, individuals need to eat

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or

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. Because it contains protein and essential vitamins that will help to improve the quality of each cell and tissue in our body. Research states

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regularly eating

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every day can improve people’s intelligence. Despite

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it

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, vegetarians can replace their need

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protein by consuming nut products.

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, replacing

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or

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with other protein sources

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important.

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, being a vegetarian

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will help the

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because we can reduce the waste of

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meat’s

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leftover

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and

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gas

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that

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from the management process.

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, individuals can support

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environment

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the environment

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by not

over consuming

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meat

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or

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and

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sure that come from

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farm

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farms

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or fishermen. And

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refuse to buy from farms or sellers which use chemicals in their products.

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is one of the ways to ensure that the consumed food

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not harm the

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. In conclusion, in my opinion, consuming animal products (

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or

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) can give us more advantages because of the nutrients that are useful to the body. Even though eating neither

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nor

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can improve our health and contribute to the

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by reducing waste that

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from leftover

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or

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.