The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
The pie charts compare the proportion of electricity production between France and Australia in 1980 and 2000.
It is clear that
both countries had
experienced Wrong verb form
have
a
growth compared to the past years.
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By contrast
, there was an alternation in Australian’s
electricity production, which increased to 130 out of 170 Correct your spelling
Australia’s
units
in 2000. In addition
, coal was used much more often than other fuels in both years. In 1980, natural gas and hydro power
each contributed 20 Correct your spelling
hydropower
units
of 130, then
it had reduced to only 2 units
of 170 in 2000.
Moreover
, in France, coal mining has not undergone any changes, remaining at the level of 25 units
of production. However
, in 1980 there was the same percentage for coal and natural gas which is 25 units
of 90 but only natural gas decreased to 2 units
of 180 in 2000.Submitted by dnm.best on
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